Monday, 31 October 2011

draft one and feedback


Feedback- I asked my friend Michaela how i could improve this magazine cover, she said that to make it better I could use more than one colour on the text and may be use a different image that would show off the college, like the model holding books and being somewhere around the college.

I also realised that I had said the price was 10 pounds rather than 1 which is something I would have to change on the next draft

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