when looking at this first draft their are several things i would change, first of all their is the fact that the masthead is cutting off the top of the models head, therefore i could improve by placing the masthead behind her head. i also don't like how the colour of the main feature clashes with her clothing, so i could try and use a different image to resolve this problem.
I could also make the image look more professional by editing it on photoshop.
Gill Sans MT Condensed for main feature font
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