draft three and feedback

feedback- After going back and adding another cover line to my magazine, I asked another college student, Charlotte, what she thought about my magazine. She said she thought that the colour scheme matched well with the logo of the school and the magazine its self looked professional and conventional.

i then asked my teacher Tim if this would good to use as my final magazine cover, he said that it looked to busy, the barcode was to large and the flash was in the wrong place.